review and analysis

* The idea being my story is about my way and thoughts of going to college and learning new stuff I had tried to empathise the use of humour as its seams common and successful thing in illustrations I got that from my researcher, I had included the thoughts and things that where happening in the way through college and chose the right path for me. But I haven't included any specific moments from my life because nothing special happened while I was applying to college that would be influencing my decision, so I keep it pretty simple and straight forward.



*One of Almu Redondo illustrations had heavy influence in my character design with the way he had drawn the dreads in his "man and pet" illustration. I also like how he coloured his work and the light use of out lines having them more defined in only certain areas that needed more separation and underlining the rest of it looks like it slightly darker than the main colour. Redondo had influenced me with a simple design on the face features such as round eyes and such other things in human form that had been simplify but keeping the human form and making it appealing to the viewers.



* The structure of my comic strip seams clear to me it has a simple flow form left to the right with wonky sections that separate the cells. Maybe it would look better if each cell had or didn't have a text box at the bottom to make it more aesthetic.



*The illustration seems like a good representation of my self I had identified the key features to create my character. I could develop the background more, but it seems OK with the character being the vocal and main point of the hat views is meant to focus on when looking at the comic but filling the space with colours that look good as well.



*The visual I think it's good in my opinion, its easy to get engaged in the in the deep colours and the good illustration that has interesting look to it that can appeal to many people.



*I will develop my work to make it stronger by developing the structure of the cells as well as scanning the the image and enhancing it in photoshop, as well as improve the line work to make it a lot cleaner and maybe possibly use more colours to enhance the image. Also I would experiment more with different media more to maybe achieve better visual effect or
something that might appeal to a different audience.

Journey thru college comic 0.2

after finalizing my comic I thought that some experimentation can help me find a better visual impact and that the viewer would interact with the comic more. so I decided to use full color(using graphic markers) in it and it turned out good  and had a nice impact so i might use this for my final peace but I still like the use of minimal color but it can be more suitable for story boards just to indicate the color of an specific  person or an object I would use that stile of coloring for story boards in future but for a comic strip full coloring is more suitable in my opinion and I shall use that type of coloring.

Journey thru college comic

I had finished my main story and had made a a comic with all seals completed and I had made some copy's of it so I can be more relaxed with the coloring after making and coloring some quick sketches  to decide what type of coloring i should use for the best visual effect and i thing that the minimum use of color worked well and I decided to use that on the comic. I still can do some different variations of it using different media or stile.

  

charakter design

I did more work on the" my story thru college" work and i had to develop my character more so at the beginning i just made the main story quickly just to on pouts notes to see if i could add some seals or take some out of the story. Then  I did some recherche in to designing and developing characters to help me get some ideas for the stile of the animation so i did some sketches on paper and in my sketch books and mad up some nice illustrations representing me to tell the the story of my journey to college how I think i progressed and developed and to describe me thous and felling thru a video scribe or a  comic strip.

after completing the story and drawing a comic with an pencil i went over it with a black ink pen to make it stand out more and then copied it in a photo copier to keep the ordinal and be able to experiment a bit to see what stile of coloring will work the best and will have the best visual effect  

character and background development reserch

had did some research on character design to help me in working out how will my character develop for the video scribe / comic  will be developed and brought to a final idea Good representation of a character development u can see the different ages facial expressions and clothing looks good nice relaxed and natural lines I like the the roughness of it and how well it works . 

this one had helped me to design the hair of my character and made me come up with efficient quick way to draw dreads it also has interesting coloring and cool stile that is appealing to see 

something to help see how the body moves and reacts it is very informative about the body movement and can help with designing a character if they where to hold a a special pose unique for that character. 

also did some recherche in to the background /environment development to see if i could have a develop background in my comic.This design is nice it is highly develop and rich in colors and interesting view  

 I like that it shows how it had bean developed and looks good on the final design it as good shading and nice looking colors  it fills the space nice with the house and the cliffs It can help me to know how to develop and background .

Nice and simple drawings but elegant enough to be seen for an while during the animation of the characters, it looks even with less defined details and relaxed  lines and minor amounts of dark areas on it.

shows structure of the house nice and detailed gives u ideas to what it may have inside of it, look nice ad have good descriptions 

a very nice peace of art that must had taken lots of developmental work and recherche as well as visual reference.It looks very appealing.i like the illusion of distance on it as the bridge being close and the mountains far in the back, good use of color shades and the lighting. 

comic design

I like that kinda of lay out it is not too boring and not too confusing it seemed simple to read and follow the main story plot. i like how the cells are different sizes and the nice thick white lines separating them from each other

This one is nice as well i like how the cells are played out and the have no lines that separates them but the have small cuts in it that separates them and the cells themselves are filed with color in cinda of oval shape making them round and reach one has the round edges because of the cuts making a nice separation that can not be spotted by some people straight away

I like this one because of it unqe stile and there are difrent tipes of cells across the comic and and one of them has no lanes that seperate it or loks it of but it is still seperated as the ones under it has lines that seperate the cells it is also wery well laid out that makes it estetick and engajing to look at 

This one is interesting as well it has nice simple cells that have space between them to separate them and it has some sort of magnifying glass on the middle to make specific parts look more important and stand out from the rest bringing more attention to that point of the comic strip seems like an interesting idea that i can use in my work to make some parts look more important 

Interesting layout of cells on all of those being different and it makes an interesting kind of design every cell being different makes it have nice flow and keeps the reader engage i like that kind of layout and might use similar style of layout in my animation

cartoon strip editorial reserche

I chose this illustration because i like its stile but i also think that it is define to a certain extent  I like the slight shading and the interesting stile and it also has a good humor to it  

This is much more simplified stile but it is still appealing and looks good and gets the message across.It has nice smooth lines on the characters nice strong contrast that brings the characters out .

This one may look detailed at first but when u take a better look u can see the simplicity of it which i think is grate  It is made out of simple shapes and straight lines to make a good character design that stands out and is presenting well and works good in a comic

I like the stile of this one it is original  and looks old school nice natural lines and well presented back ground with minor details and a good character that is in a moving pose making him look like he is ruining i also like the deep think and dark lines that define the character and the background. 

I like the Ruth lines of this one with Cross hatches  and the lines and the color going over the outlines on the smoke and the transition in the background between the colors  and the comedy of it. I m not a fan of that typical character design looks boring  to me but its just my opinion.  

Is is a common stile that is often seen in news papers its is simple and goofy looking but it fits as it is used for jokes nice use of lines to indicate the shade on the characters and the environment i like the liter green are where the characters are standing bot think there could be more of it to fill the space.  

This one is classy and i like the classy still of it using simple colors and smooth lines looks good its nice and simple but still good and appealing to the eye maybe some shading would give it a beater impact but i don't think it is necessary for this stile.

Again a goofy illustration butt much more developed with more detail and a good use of color and shading  looking good the type of shading can be liter bit difficult to achieve using graphics markers but not so much If it would be done digitally.  

This one is differed and had strongly abounded the relation to a real body form  but still can see the human futures i like that stile it has nice Crosshatches for shading and back ground.   

This one its really simple but works well for illustration and sorry telling if you want to use that kind of simple stile. It could work beater with more shading and if the characters where more similar in the stile i think that they are too different in the facial features for example a nose.  

This one is more advance but it still have some quick rough lines on it used for the shading and the less realistic character fits in nice with the car it has that dark felling to it because of the heavy shading . 

Nice puppet looking character that resembles a human and it would be easy to create a character future with this kind of work i like the deep colors and the simple lines and shapes making this character. 

Old school illustration that is simple but still defined and looking good.nice dark lines defying the characters very straight and controlled lines and a simple design. 

Illustration looks good nice warm colors and it is using fairly straight lines and looks good with out the black out lines which is unusual for an illustration but make it look more realistic in a way.  

a very nice simple illustration but also very good illustration simple but the characters cans stand out.Nice simple straight and controlled lines making a simple shapes to make a nice character i may experiment with this stile of illustration. 

Video scribe

(THERE IS A VIDE STILL NEEDS TO BE SPEEDED UP DON'T HAVE AXES TO PREMIERE RN)

We had to do video scribibg a fast video of drawing and writing some kind of story or information . we had to do ours about letters and numbers in art so we did some sketches and of ideas what could be drawn an written it had to Be fast illustration just to get the message across after that i took a fresh piece of piper set up a camera and record as i am illustrating then it had been downloaded to a computer and speeded up in premiere.

Dream interpretation

We was randomly given a description of a dream from a dream shearing website then after reading it had to make a storyboard describing that dream and after i had to take out parts of the story board of the dream and make the composition resembling that dream. It took me 3 attempts to creating a story board that i wad happy with as at firs i tried to adapt Fallout "pit boy" stile for it but it didn't work for 2 times so i just decided to do it with my own stile i didn't care about the detail much as its just an story board. As for my composition i decided to go with an semi abstract of a grey scared face around red red water using paint doing expressive mark making i was happy with the outcome.